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Satish Ranadive
09-16-2016, 01:08 AM
Basic editing. Cropped for composition. Extra small branch is removed from left side of perch.
Eye lighten.


ISO: 1600, 1/500 @9.0. patterning metering.
Canon 7D II, 100-400 mm.

Thanks for viewing, critiques and comments,
Kind Regards,
Satish.

Jonathan Ashton
09-16-2016, 03:49 AM
Lovely shot of the sparrow - good details and pleasant pose. The background is pleasant and non intrusive.
I feel three things would help improve and image taken under similar circumstance:
1) A more interesting and possibly finer perch (maybe some mosses or lichens or interesting bark)
2) The camera could be slightly higher or alternatively the subject slightly lower.
3) I feel the sparrow is just a little large in the frame - this is just me - other people may well disagree.

Daniel Cadieux
09-16-2016, 11:05 AM
Nice proud-looking pose form this good -looking gal! I like the details. I agree with Jon's pointers.

William Dickson
09-16-2016, 03:27 PM
Beautiful looking female House Sparrow. I like the pose.

Will

Satish Ranadive
09-17-2016, 01:49 AM
Jonathan, Daniel Sir and Will, Thank you so much for your feed back and kind compliments.
Jonathan, I tried today with different perches but sparrow sits only on certain perches only.

Regards,
Satish.

Stu Bowie
09-17-2016, 02:39 AM
Hi Satish, lovely pose, you have really brought out the feather detail so well. Sparrow's have such lovely colours, even the females.

Satish Ranadive
09-17-2016, 04:42 AM
Thank you so much for your kind compliments, Stuart Sir.
Regards,
Satish.

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Kalin Botev
09-17-2016, 03:11 PM
Hi Satish,
Great looking sparrow with nice details and BG. I also think that it would be better if the camera was a little higher or the subject a little lower – standing at the eye level of the subject.
Thanks for sharing,
Kalin

Satish Ranadive
09-17-2016, 08:16 PM
Thank for Kalin, your feed back and kind comments.

Regards,
Satish.