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stuart wanuck
09-11-2016, 11:47 AM
nikon d 800 e
ap 1250 @7

Don Lacy
09-13-2016, 06:09 PM
Stuart. I love old rust and the patina of a finely aged car. While I like the comp I do wish you would have framed it a little more to the right eliminating the end of the wiper and showing a little bit more of the door.

Don Railton
09-13-2016, 11:16 PM
Hi Stuart

I have looked at this a few times and while I like the colour and detail the rusty body provides there was something not resonating with me and i was not sure what it is.. After reading Don L's comments I think its the lines that are leading my eye out of frame. straight up from the bottom and either left or right but straight to the image border.. Love the colour and fine detail however...

Don

Andrew McLachlan
09-22-2016, 04:28 PM
Agree with both Don L and Don R here...I think this scene may have more impact as a horizontal...did you shoot any?