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Joseph Przybyla
03-25-2016, 08:15 AM
I captured this image of an American Coot at Lake Mirror in Lakeland, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

Nikon D7000
Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED shot at 400mm (600mm FFE)
1/2000 F/5.6 Matrix Metering 0 EV ISO 800 AWB, camera supported by a monopod
Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
Cropped for composition and presentation

arash_hazeghi
03-25-2016, 11:34 AM
I like the head shot, the whites on the bill have been turned grey though most likely as a result of Lightroom's highlight recovery. the reds in the eye also look a bit too saturated for a coot.

It's a very nice portrait otherwise TFS

Daniel Cadieux
03-25-2016, 02:09 PM
Well exposed and sharp. Nicely balanced tight comp. I agree with Arash on his points, but all else is super.

Joseph Przybyla
03-26-2016, 08:48 AM
Arash and Daniel, thank you for viewing and commenting. Very much appreciated...

Arash I revisited the original and made the changes you suggested. Thank you.

Marina Scarr
03-28-2016, 02:24 PM
You've done well choosing your composition here. Agree on the grey on the beak, but the eye color looks just right to me.