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Wendy Kates
07-21-2015, 09:37 PM
This was shot from Garden of the Gods Park in Colorado Springs. Critiques welcome.
Canon 7D Mark ii, 17-55 f/2.8 lens
f/10, 1/60s, ISO200, tripod

Andrew McLachlan
07-27-2015, 08:12 PM
Hi Wendy, I like the overall composition...a couple of tweaks you may consider...for me the brightest sections of the clouds are just a little too bright and could be toned tone a touch. There is a slight cyan or blue color cast on the mountain that can be easily corrected.

Rachel Hollander
08-01-2015, 10:19 AM
Hi Wendy - Lots to look at here. I like the path leading us into the image and the vertical composition works well. Agree with Andrew on his suggestions.

TFS,
Rachel

Morkel Erasmus
09-01-2015, 03:58 AM
Hi Wendy - sorry I missed this.
Andrew made some good suggestions indeed. It's a pleasing scene, just lacking some fine tweaking to make it pop.
I'd also look at avoiding that halo along the treeline if you are reprocessing.

Wendy Kates
09-01-2015, 07:06 PM
Thanks, all, for your input. One of our local hospitals just chose this image to hang on their walls, so I'll get to work reprocessing it with your suggestions!