Cloudy Skies

[Don Lacy]

This is my attempt at one of those stormy cloudy skies scenes

6D, 16-35 at 16, 1/8s at f/22, Manual, evaluative metered, ISO 50, Single image

[Diane Miller]

Love the FG rocks and the soft light, but I notice some very flat tonalities in the mid-ground water, especially on the left side.

[dankearl]

I think you needed stormer skies......
The rocks and IQ are nice.

[Morkel Erasmus]

Nice water motion and overall pastel colours here Don.
I agree tonally it looks a tad flat - some midtone contrast would work well.
I keep wanting to see more of the sky here - presume it wasn't that interesting though?

[Don Railton]

Hi Don

I think the ratio of water and sky should be reversed if indeed the sky is your subject.. it's not dominant enough for me as presented. Agree with Dan, the rock is wonderful..

DON

[Andrew McLachlan]

Hi Don, very nice placement of the foreground rock but do wisj for darker skies...maybe the Color Efex Grad Filter?