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Norm Dulak
04-15-2015, 07:41 AM
D7000 w/80-400mm @ 400mm, hand held from a skiff
ISO 800; f/6.3, 1/1250 sec.; MM -0.33
Std CS6 adjustments
This Great Egret took flight from the bank of a branch of the Amazon River, in Peru. I like this view of the bird's departure, because it fully captures the beautiful plumage, while showing the face.
All C&C are welcome.
Marina Scarr
04-15-2015, 07:55 AM
Don't mind the bird flying away here as the BG is lovely and the topside feathers add so much interest. However, your whites are looking muddy, and I think reprocessing with that in mind could correct this issue.
Norm Dulak
04-15-2015, 08:11 AM
Thanks, Marina. Are you saying that the whites should be brighter? If so, how would you accomplish that?
Jonathan Ashton
04-15-2015, 08:29 AM
Norm could I suggest using the white dropper in levels or curves on the white plumage, I think that will perhaps correct the problem.
Norm Dulak
04-15-2015, 08:31 AM
Thanks, Jonathan! I appreciate your providing a solution to the problem. I've used the white dropper in levels for this repost, and I think the result is better. And I'll keep your good advice in mind in the future.
William Dickson
04-15-2015, 04:01 PM
Hi Norm, the repost is much better, good tip from Jon :S3: Lovely image and you captured it well.
Will
andresleon
04-15-2015, 04:13 PM
The pose and action is very well captured. I think the egret fits very nicely in the frame. I also like the background as it gives a wonderful contrast with the white bird. I think the feathers are a little overexposed and therefore have lost some of the fine feather detail they may show otherwise, specially towards the central back area. I may be wrong, but the first image seems to retain more of this detail than the second version.
William Dickson
04-15-2015, 04:34 PM
Somewhere between the two :S3: I reckon would be fine Andresleon
Norm Dulak
04-17-2015, 07:04 AM
Thanks everyone for your comments and suggestions!
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