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Dan O'Leary
05-26-2008, 11:23 AM
Another from my trip to Gatorland yesterday. There is a lot to pick at with this one - light angle, cropped a bit tight on the left, head angle off by a few minutes, etc... but I enjoy the complementary colors of the subject and background. Maybe you will too.

2008:05:25 07:40:05
1dm3 with 100-400mm @ 285mm
Av, 1/800 sec, f/5.6, Eval, ISO 800

PS - The JPG looks a bit oversaturated for some reason.

Stephen Stephen
05-26-2008, 05:10 PM
Dan I like the pose here and you already critique your own image. I'll just add that the OOF structure/building in the background is a bit distracting

Lana Hays
05-26-2008, 05:57 PM
Dan
You've done a nice job critiquing your own image. I do like the "wild" look of this youngster. The detail is excellent. I think the BG would work better if the OOF buildings went to the top rather than having a tip of the blue sky which could be changed.

Dan O'Leary
05-26-2008, 06:47 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I actually started to clone / QM out the blue at the top (which is actually a building of some sort) but wasn't able to extend the brown background quickly in a way that looked very natural. I also found that I liked the blue for some reason, so decided to like it as part of this imperfect but likeable image. ;-)

Gus Cobos
05-27-2008, 12:50 PM
Hi Dan,
I like your composition, I would fill in the blue sky in the left top corner of the frame with the brownish red hue of the building and defuse it even more...:cool:

Alfred Forns
05-28-2008, 09:45 AM
Fully agree with your own assessment Just the slight head turn. Do find the bg very complementing and appealing These youngsters are photogenic birds !!! Like it a lot !!!

DanWalters
06-17-2008, 09:38 PM
Maybe needs just a little more space in front of the bird. Oterwise, great shot. Like the colors and the light.