Standing still

[subramanya_ck]

This one is from a stream near Yaana, India.

EXIF:
Canon 5D Mark III & Canon 17-4 f/4 L @ 20mm
Manual exposure @ f/11 and 1/5 seconds, AWB
Used Hoya CPL

C&C are most welcome.

[Diane Miller]

Very nice composition of this scene. The greens are very vivid -- I'd experiment with toning them down a little. (They might be more yellows than greens.)

[Morkel Erasmus]

Nice tranquil scene indeed. I agree with Diane on the greens/yellows...
I dig that you can see the rocks below the water too.

[Andrew McLachlan]

A very nice river scene that will look lovely once the greens are toned down a touch. I too love the that we can see the details below the water.

[Lyle Gruby]

Definitely a serene scene. Technically much improved from the previous shot. I'd consider cropping in some from the left, and it appears to me you need a little clockwise rotation. I'd also agree with the above commenters about the greens.

[Don Railton]

Great shot, agree with greens being a bit too strong...


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[Dave Mills]

I like the idea of cropping a bit off the left(just before the tree) and toning down the greens. Greens are the easiest color to spot when oversaturated. The rock in the FG adds a nice element of interest.

[Don Lacy]

Lovely little scene agree with the others on cropping from the left

[subramanya_ck]

Dear all,


thank you so much for your feedback and encouraging words. I worked on the image again tonight and here is the outcome. Please let me know if this looks better !!