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subramanya_ck
12-18-2014, 10:15 AM
This one is from a stream near Yaana, India.
EXIF:
Canon 5D Mark III & Canon 17-4 f/4 L @ 20mm
Manual exposure @ f/11 and 1/5 seconds, AWB
Used Hoya CPL
C&C are most welcome.
Diane Miller
12-18-2014, 02:49 PM
Very nice composition of this scene. The greens are very vivid -- I'd experiment with toning them down a little. (They might be more yellows than greens.)
Morkel Erasmus
12-18-2014, 04:21 PM
Nice tranquil scene indeed. I agree with Diane on the greens/yellows...
I dig that you can see the rocks below the water too.
Andrew McLachlan
12-18-2014, 06:00 PM
A very nice river scene that will look lovely once the greens are toned down a touch. I too love the that we can see the details below the water.
Lyle Gruby
12-18-2014, 07:56 PM
Definitely a serene scene. Technically much improved from the previous shot. I'd consider cropping in some from the left, and it appears to me you need a little clockwise rotation. I'd also agree with the above commenters about the greens.
Don Railton
12-19-2014, 02:04 AM
Great shot, agree with greens being a bit too strong...
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Dave Mills
12-19-2014, 11:22 AM
I like the idea of cropping a bit off the left(just before the tree) and toning down the greens. Greens are the easiest color to spot when oversaturated. The rock in the FG adds a nice element of interest.
Don Lacy
12-19-2014, 08:00 PM
Lovely little scene agree with the others on cropping from the left
subramanya_ck
12-20-2014, 09:31 AM
Dear all,
thank you so much for your feedback and encouraging words. I worked on the image again tonight and here is the outcome. Please let me know if this looks better !!
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