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stuart wanuck
11-17-2014, 06:13 PM
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Dave Mills
11-18-2014, 02:19 PM
Hi Stuart,
The flow of the water is appealing. If this were mine i would do 2 things. First I would crop the top down to where the orange is eliminated. I find the color distracting and pulling my eye up into that area.
Second, I would have given the falls more room on the left. It looks like the falls are almost bumping up on the side of the frame. They need an area to go into....

Don Lacy
11-22-2014, 07:27 PM
Hi Stuart, As soon as I open this I thought the same thing as Dave on the falls being to close to the left hand frame of the image. I am ok with the color up top but I would have loved to see a comp with less on the bottom and the water moved to the further to the right.

Andrew McLachlan
11-23-2014, 11:21 AM
Hi Stuart, this is a lovely waterfall. Agree with Don and Dave that more room on the left is needed and I would have composed the scene to exclude the leaves along the top edge of the comp from poking into the frame. Looking forward to more.