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Dvir Barkay
11-05-2014, 07:13 PM
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Light rays hit the forest floor after a hole opens up in the fog. This is close to my previous shot, and the fog was heavy. The lack of apparent sharpness is because the fog is smudging details.

Sony A77, Sony 16-50@50mm, F/6.3, cropped a bit, Pindus NP in Greece, 2014

Andrew McLachlan
11-09-2014, 09:33 AM
Hi Dvir, looks like you had a wonderful morning at this location. I like the overall look to this scene but am wondering if the uppermost and brightest foggy areas should be toned down just a tiny bit and for me the tree branch n the lower right and the one on the left side of the frame are not working for me. I think I would have preferred a few steps closer to eliminate them from the scene, or a few steps backwards to include more of them.

Dvir Barkay
11-09-2014, 11:58 AM
The whites aren't clipped or anything, I can tone it down slightly though. It was really tough to compose really well with this one. It was taken from the road, through some trees, the two branches you see on the left and right, and I tried my best, but I could not go back or forward. I will look at the original and see if I can do something.