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stuart wanuck
11-04-2014, 09:40 PM
nikon d 800
80-400 mm lens

Morkel Erasmus
11-05-2014, 12:30 AM
I like the image design here, as well as the colours, Stuart.
I think you can extract more detail and dynamic range from this image by toning down the overly bright highlights through a luminosity adjustment - specifically to get more detail out of the white clouds and yellow foliage.
I wish the OOF branch bottom right wasn't in the frame.

stuart wanuck
11-05-2014, 12:55 PM
thanks morkel took ypur advice with luminescence looks better

Andrew McLachlan
11-09-2014, 09:13 AM
Hi Stuart, this is a lovely scene and works well under the full sun conditions you were in...Morkel has already touched on my suggestions for improvement...could you have moved two your left to eliminate the out of focus branches in the lower right?