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Geoffrey Montagu
10-24-2014, 10:53 AM
I know. Had to post it anyway. Image from this past July on a local river. C&C welcome.

D700, Nikon 500mm + 1.4 tc, 1/640, f 9.0, ISO 320, Gitzo tripod, Wimberley Gimbal head.


Geoffrey

Randy Stout
10-24-2014, 11:15 AM
Geoffrey:

The impressive size difference, the uplifted gaze of chick, well exposed, works for me.

I could see a version cropped as a vertical, to really play up the height difference, esp. since the adult is already cropped, and the negative space to the left doesn't add a lot.

Fun. Made me smile.

Randy

Jim Crosswell
10-24-2014, 03:08 PM
I like the interaction, sharpness and exposure. When I saw the thumbnail I was thinking this would make an excellent vertical. Very well done Geoffrey.

Raybel Robles
10-24-2014, 04:53 PM
Same thing I was thinking before reading the comments above. A vertical crop may help even better with the composition.

John Cooper
10-24-2014, 08:08 PM
Nicely captured Geoffrey - the rapport between this young cygnet and parent just works beautifully.

Agree with the suggestion of vertical format which would make an even stronger statement.

Dvir Barkay
10-24-2014, 08:39 PM
nice shot, agree about the vertical crop emphasizing the size differences.

gail bisson
10-25-2014, 07:33 AM
I think you should post a repost as a vertical. I think that would be really nice!

Shawn Zierman
10-25-2014, 09:20 AM
You nailed the "cute and cuddly" on this one. I played around with a sqare crop on this one and really dug it...there's is waaay more to appreciate vs discount going on here sir.

Miguel Palaviccini
10-25-2014, 01:31 PM
I'm going to agree with the comments above, a vertical crop would make this image that much better. The interaction caught here is great.

William Dickson
10-25-2014, 02:44 PM
Well done Geoffrey, I like this. The wee one is saying 'But why not mummy' :S3:

Bill Dix
10-25-2014, 03:31 PM
Geoffrey, I liked this the first time I saw it, and still do. Although the negative space on the left helps emphasize the smallness of the cygnet, the idea of a vertical crop has a lot of merit. Can't wait to see it.

Geoffrey Montagu
10-25-2014, 04:28 PM
Thanks Everyone for your compliments, and though I like the original crop, because of popular requests here is a vertical crop. Maybe as suggested by Shawn a square crop would also work.

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Bill Dix
10-25-2014, 04:34 PM
I like it either way; two for the price of one.

Daniel Cadieux
10-25-2014, 06:11 PM
Ooh that vertical crop works well! I think a square with keeping all of the adult from the OP would be swell too. Love the parent-chick interaction.

Diane Miller
10-25-2014, 06:52 PM
The vertical works for me!! Such a cute moment caught!

I wonder how it would look with more detail brought into the light body -- it pulls my eye over to the edge.

Marina Scarr
10-26-2014, 08:20 PM
My first thoughts were so cute but needs to be a vertical, and boy what a difference it makes. The interaction and intimacy were lost in the horizontal version.