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Dave Phillips
05-22-2008, 07:04 PM
Posted and illustrative version of this a while back in OOTB.
Here is original up for critique.......400mm w/1.4X, ISO 800, 1/640, f/9, +.67, AV

that is the natural bg coloration
thanks for input

Maxis Gamez
05-22-2008, 07:29 PM
HI David,

You are having WAY too much fun with these guys.... :). Love the amazing BG but I wish the bird beak was not as close to the perch. The details and colors are on the money and the composition works for me.

Keep up the good work!

George DeCamp
05-22-2008, 07:59 PM
Wow, this has a painterly look to it. I like it a lot, the colors, the BG and the contrast all seem to work well together. Nice!! :)

Daniel Cadieux
05-22-2008, 08:09 PM
I love the hunched look of the heron as well as its ruffled feathers. Only thing for me is I find the blunt ending of the perch peculiar, and also how it is thinner at the frame's edge. Very neat BG and colours throughout!

Dave Phillips
05-22-2008, 08:18 PM
thanks for all the input guys(wow, 3 mods)
Daniel, the perch is a bit strange, I did remove a small upright and large branch behind, but the perch itself s unedited.

here is unedited from RAW, cropped a bit
http://i29.tinypic.com/14aaoph.jpg

Maxis Gamez
05-22-2008, 08:24 PM
Hi Dave,

What a difference. Excellent work!

Blake Shadle
05-23-2008, 09:37 AM
Wow, really nice work in PP, Dave! I like the background a lot in this image.

Gary Dumer
05-23-2008, 09:42 AM
Stunning work in the capture as well as PP.

Michael Menefee
05-25-2008, 12:14 PM
Great job in PP, I think you made appropriate changes to really get the best out of this capture. Well done.