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Morkel Erasmus
08-13-2014, 04:56 PM
...from our autumn bloom earlier this year.

Single exposure, sky toned down with the grad tool in Lightroom.

Techs:
Nikon D800
Nikkor 14-24mm f2.8 @ 18mm
f13 | 1/20 SS | ISO-50

David Stephens
08-13-2014, 09:29 PM
Lovely flower colors Morkel and I like that a shadow has come over some of the flowers.

I'm thinking that a 2 to 1 aspect ratio would be nice, with the crop just above the bright white clouds.

Don Railton
08-13-2014, 11:22 PM
Hi Morkel,

Love the field of colour and the sky. I think the image would be stronger with a focal point however.. Maybe you could have picked on a single flower and gone in real close? Not sure how close you could have focused with that lens...

Regards

DON

David Stephens
08-14-2014, 10:58 AM
I think what you've demonstrated is the vastness of the field of flowers and the brilliant colors. You could focus on one, but I think that would weaken the overall message.

Don Lacy
08-14-2014, 02:09 PM
Hi Morkel, Love the burst of colors in the image and the swept of the field, I would also crop some off the top taking the horizon to the upper 1/3 of the frame giving the field a more prominent position in the frame.

Andrew McLachlan
08-15-2014, 10:15 PM
Hi Morkel, this is another lovely Cosmos scene to add to your already lovely collection. This makes me jealous as I can barely keep them in my garden here and they seem to be common weeds there :S3: