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stuart wanuck
05-28-2014, 06:14 PM
nikon d 800
sigma 180 mm

Jonathan Ashton
05-29-2014, 04:56 PM
A fine shot the crop is tight but it works. I don't mind the OOF flowers but might give consideration to removing those on the left (I think it would depend which day it is!). Super details in the butterfly. I am wondering if the greens are a tad strong - maybe the yellow end and possibly there is a cast on the butterfly? It may be worthwhile applying the white dropper tool on the butterfly in the raw conversion - see what you think.

Diane Miller
05-29-2014, 08:30 PM
If these are like the white butterflies I see, they are hard to catch. Agree with Jon, I'd love to see a looser composition. Cloning is fair. There is a bit of cyan on the butterfly but it may be natural, in the light. I always enjoy a touch of color, no matter how it got there.

John Robinson
05-30-2014, 06:38 AM
Maybe some more room all around but otherwise looks fine to me.
Cheers
JohnR

Steve Maxson
06-10-2014, 07:05 PM
Hi Stuart. The pose, sharpness, and exposure are all first rate! I would agree with cloning the OOF flower in the ULC and you might consider adding a little canvas on the left - it would be easy to do with this smooth background. :S3: Very nicely done!