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Jay Gould
05-04-2014, 02:50 PM
140305 - Tenerife, Canary Islands
Loro Parque Rainforest
Olympus EM-1; Panasonic 35-100@47; 1/400@f/2.8; ISO 1000

Randy Stout
05-04-2014, 03:12 PM
Jay:

Nice to see you posting. Nice pose, lovely bird, remarkable bg.

I might crop it more it more as a vertical, coming in from the right side, and consider toning down the luminosity of the perch a bit.

Cheers

Randy

Jay Gould
05-04-2014, 03:33 PM
Thanks Randy!

Karl Egressy
05-04-2014, 05:16 PM
Nice looking bird, excellent pose. Toning down the perch would help.

Raymond Lee
05-04-2014, 07:27 PM
Great capture! Really nice pose! I also agree to tone down the perch a bit. There's a bit of noise or artifacts in the background.

Andy Shepherd
05-05-2014, 02:57 AM
He's a cheeky little chap!, Jay...and with a superb crest too. Agree re a vertical crop and toning down the perch.

Daniel Cadieux
05-05-2014, 07:20 AM
I used to have one of these as a pet, not any longer though as I prefer them outside :-) Nice exposure, details, love the raised crest. Good suggestions you got. There are also a few repeating patterns in the BG that you can tweak a bit more.

arash_hazeghi
05-05-2014, 01:17 PM
I like the pose and BG, IQ is not great however, the feathers look over-sharpened and noisy with very little detail especially in the blacks. overall saturation and contrast are lacking too. more room to the left would be better

TFS

Jay Gould
05-06-2014, 01:56 AM
Thank you everyone for all of your comments and critiques; truly appreciated! Here is my "attempt" to apply all of the suggestions including Daniel's Rorschach Test.