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Joseph Przybyla
04-01-2014, 06:55 PM
I captured this image of a Wood Stork family at Merritt Island NWR, Merritt Island, Florida in 2012. I keep going back to it as my knowledge and post processing skills improve. I recently started from the beginning again with this result. The image is about 75% of full frame. I cleaned up the top of reflections of Mangroves that were distracting. Your thoughts and critique would be appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

Nikon D7000
Nikon 55-300mm VR AF F/4.5-5.6 shot at 300mm (450mm FFE)
1/400 F/8 ISO 320

John Robinson
04-01-2014, 07:39 PM
Love the symetry of this and I don't normally go for reflections but broken up like this I can live with !!
Nice monochrome maybe ?? Wall hanger I reckon
Great shot whatever
JOhn

Tim King
04-01-2014, 10:05 PM
I like it. Very nice exposure. Fine job.

Cal Walters
04-01-2014, 11:51 PM
Love the hunting pose (I assume). Nice work with all the whites.

Rob Melone
04-02-2014, 12:18 PM
Awesome composition and capture Joseph!

gail bisson
04-02-2014, 02:50 PM
This is very different. Techs look good.
I like the 3 subjects and the way they are placed within the group.
I just wish they were all heading towards the viewer instead of away from us.
I feel like it needs some CW rotation.
Do you have the full reflection of the middle stork? I would include it if you have it.
Gail

Troy Lim
04-02-2014, 09:56 PM
This is very different. Techs look good.
I like the 3 subjects and the way they are placed within the group.
I just wish they were all heading towards the viewer instead of away from us.
I feel like it needs some CW rotation.
Do you have the full reflection of the middle stork? I would include it if you have it.
Gail

I believe Gail was trying to say CCW rotation.

Diane Miller
04-02-2014, 11:04 PM
Agree on the rotation -- CCW clearly meant! I'm torn between wanting more reflection or less. Might go for slightly lower contrast with more detail int he darks.

Joseph Przybyla
04-03-2014, 09:30 AM
Thank you all for viewing, commenting and offering suggestions to improve the image. I have worked on the image using your suggestions as a guide. I expanded the crop to include the full reflection. I added canvas to the sides so that I could crop to a 16x9. Here is the re-edited image.

Diane Miller
04-03-2014, 10:41 AM
Much more pleasing to me! It is a little surprising how much less dominating the reflection of the larger bird is this way. Still feels like a little more rotation is needed.