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Terry Johnson
02-23-2014, 06:30 PM
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Hello, this image was taken early in the morning as I was taking my sailboat from Astoria, OR. to the San Juan Islands, WA.

Nikon D40
95mm
ISO-200
F5.3
1/160
HH

Comments welcome...Terry Johnson:S3:

Jay Gould
02-23-2014, 06:37 PM
Lovely; I miss my sailboat!

Not crazy about the framing; this is well captured and I do not believe it adds.

I would crop down a sliver and remove the strip of grey sky against the frame. I find it a distraction from your story.

David Kenny
02-24-2014, 08:32 AM
Nice shot. I just dont care for the frame. I dont think it needs it IMHO.

David Stephens
02-24-2014, 12:43 PM
Another vote against the frame gimmick. I also agree with the tiny crop suggestion to get rid of that sliver at the top. The colors and scene are wonderful. Looks like a wall hanger to me.

Norm Dulak
02-24-2014, 05:22 PM
I agree that the frame should go. I also would remove the sliver at the top, and I would go further by cloning out the light patch about 3/4 of the way up on the left side. But the colors are beautiful.

Cheryl Slechta
02-25-2014, 03:55 PM
Hi, Terry, I agree the colors and the composition are wonderful. I would remove the gray sliver at the top also:S3:

Morkel Erasmus
03-03-2014, 04:00 AM
The light and clouds are stunning here.
I'd like to see a version that's bigger (you can post up to 1200px wide) and without the frame as it draws my eye too much :tinysmile_shy_t: