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Giovanni Frescura
02-20-2014, 06:01 PM
What you think about ?
Is it fine or better b/n or no is it interesting ?
Thanks
Canon Mark IV
Canon 500 f.4
1/4000 (no tripod...)
iso 6400

John Robinson
02-20-2014, 06:05 PM
Took me a while to get it !'
I ,like it but reckon it could loose some off the left and maybe the top too. Others will seei t differently no doubt abou tthis one !
Cheers
JohnR

Don Railton
02-20-2014, 06:58 PM
Hi Giovanni

I like (no,I love..) the idea you are trying to execute here, but I feel the bird is just a little too buried in the white... I am viewing on an uncalibrated monitor but I can determine all the bars in the luminance scale bottom of screen, but I cannot see all the outline of the bird and IMHO that's important...Just a touch more definition to the bird and this could be a winner for me...

DON

Karl Egressy
02-20-2014, 08:28 PM
The idea is given with this bird and it is a good one. However, a little more definition would be nicer. Also, I find that the in focus branch right to the bird is overpowering the image.

Grace Scalzo
02-20-2014, 10:22 PM
Trim from the left and top and work on the whites (I think you have detail hiding in them) and then i think you have something special here. Kind of like a little puzzle.

Giovanni Frescura
02-21-2014, 08:25 AM
Hello
off course I have details but I would like show all white except some point

Marina Scarr
02-21-2014, 05:42 PM
This is a brain teaser, and I love it. Agree on cropping some from the left to tighten it up a bit. See what you get working on the whites a little but either way this is a fine image.

Giovanni Frescura
02-22-2014, 05:25 AM
Hello Marina
thanks
Now ir it better ?
Gio

Marina Scarr
03-09-2014, 11:04 AM
The RP is a big improvement on an already original and fresh image!!!