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Terry Johnson
02-18-2014, 01:05 PM
137955
Hello, a common goldeneye, taken a few days ago at Crystal Springs Garden in Portland, OR.
D800
70-200mm with 2.0 teleconverter at 400mm
f5.6
1/250
ISO 220
HH
Flash -1
Your comments please...Terry Johnson:S3:
Karl Egressy
02-18-2014, 01:56 PM
It looks like a Lesser Scaup to me. The beak looks over saturated. Nice water pattern and nice head turn.
Terry Johnson
02-18-2014, 02:29 PM
Karl, thanks for correcting me. It is a Lesser Scaup...Terry
Raybel Robles
02-18-2014, 03:40 PM
Hi terry,
The only suggestion I would make was to shoot from a lower angle. Im not sure if it was possible at this location but and eye to eye point of view could had improved the image a lot.
Marina Scarr
02-19-2014, 10:36 PM
While normally shooting from a lower angle lends itself to a more powerful image, I am liking this perspective. The BG water and the color of the bird are really working well together to create an interesting image. Your image needs quite a bit of CW rotation. If you bring a straight line down from your eye to the reflection of the eye, they should match.
Terry Johnson
02-20-2014, 01:36 PM
138032
Hello, this is a revised image with the Lesser Scaup more level in the viewing area. Thanks for your input Marina...Terry
Marina Scarr
02-21-2014, 09:18 AM
Still doesn't look level to my eyes. The bird's beak and eyes should be meeting its reflection. I think you may have corrected a bit too much. I also think your bird could use a little more sharpening. You're heading in the right direction.
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