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Karl Egressy
12-10-2013, 06:03 PM
Taken last December.
Full frame.
Thanks for looking.

Canon 1D MIV
Canon 500 f 4.0 +1.4x
ISO 800
f 7.1
1/800 s

Sidharth Kodikal
12-10-2013, 06:24 PM
Nice comp and sharpness, Karl. Like the effect added by the color in the feathers and the mouth to this wintery image. I see a halo around the bill that I would address. I would also sharpen the bill towards the tip more as it's starting to fall out of the dof range.

Grace Scalzo
12-10-2013, 08:51 PM
Very attractive curves and lines. Has a graphic quality to it that I find very appealing.

Greg Oakley
12-11-2013, 03:11 AM
Dynamic and interesting image Karl

Holger Leyrer
12-11-2013, 10:09 AM
Very attractive curves and lines.
This was also my first thought. It is an unusual Image.
A small point, i think it is a little soft at the eyes area

Daniel Cadieux
12-11-2013, 10:39 AM
I like what you were going for here with a nice comp and appealing lines. I have a feeling the whole image could go brighter (perhaps 1/3 stop or so) and another round of sharpening would be good, too.

John Robinson
12-11-2013, 11:40 AM
Nice "arty" one Karl Good shot for publisher wanting space for text in crook of neck ! Interesting shot.
JR

Karl Egressy
12-11-2013, 03:50 PM
Thank you all. I tried to address all the issues being mentioned while redone it starting from RAW image.
Now it is a slightly different image, mostly brighter and sharper I guess.

Sidharth Kodikal
12-11-2013, 03:56 PM
Wow, what a difference. It's a whole lot better imo, Karl

David Salem
12-12-2013, 03:23 AM
Ya, much better. Nice work Karl.

gail bisson
12-12-2013, 06:05 AM
The repost is excellent! I just love seeing reposts as it really shows how much we all learn on BPN.
I like the curves and composition,
Gail

Daniel Cadieux
12-12-2013, 10:00 AM
Repost is exactly what I had in mind, look at the difference on the snow on the bill - super job Karl!

Stu Bowie
12-12-2013, 11:54 AM
Hi Karl love the curves in this, and your repost has really turned out very well. Great work.

Satish Ranadive
12-14-2013, 06:07 AM
Magnificent close up with beautiful curves and lines. Superb re post. Wonderful composition too.

Regards,
Satish.