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Mike Salzlechner
05-11-2008, 01:53 PM
Something a little different from all the high key egrets

http://www.salzlechner.com/bpn/PC8J4895_web.jpg

1DMkIIN, 300 2.8 IS, M at 1/1000, F5 no flash

Jeffrey Sipress
05-11-2008, 02:14 PM
Fabulous. Has a fireworks effect to it. A bit much foliage to the right, but I can't see how that could have been avoided.

Fabs Forns
05-11-2008, 02:42 PM
Great display in sweet light. I feel it could go a tad brighter and if it were mine, I'd probably crop it square. It works nice as presented also. A little more room at the bottom would have been nice too.

Roman Kurywczak
05-11-2008, 02:42 PM
Hi Mike,
The whites are handled very well here. Originally I was going to comment of clipping the edges...............but as you have the same effect all around.......it doesn't detract and is very pleasing. The comp is also very pleasing.

Dave Phillips
05-11-2008, 04:49 PM
excellent comp IMO, like the foliage at bottom right.
Agree it may go a bit brighter on the bird

just an alternative....raised black point and barely touched the highlights
thinking out loud as I am playing....this is a super image

Arthur Morris
05-11-2008, 05:22 PM
Love the head angle and the raised aigrettes. I am fine with the legs cut as that puts the emphasis on the bird and the plumes. The big problem is the cluster of brown leaves near the lrc, esp. the whitewash covered one which is extremely distracting. Some type of SQ crop, as suggested by Fabs, might be the cure...

Maxis Gamez
05-12-2008, 06:44 PM
Hi Mike,

Nice to see you posting!! Keep them coming. Everything mentioned. I don't mind the feet being cut but the brown in the FG is a little distracting as mentioned.

Simon Bennett
05-13-2008, 05:03 AM
A spectacular display - something like a white lyrebird. Good job with the whites.