View Full Version : A Song Sparrow for Thanksgiving
Enrique Patino
11-28-2013, 12:34 PM
taken at a local park a couple days ago...
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7D, 500mm @f/6.3, 1/1250, ISO 800, HH. Cropped vertical and off the top a bit.
Comments welcome
vishaljadhav
11-28-2013, 01:32 PM
The vertical composition is the only way this would have rocked and you got it perfect there
the pose is fine, IQ is fantastic
The grass may be darkened a bit , not sure how it will look but its brighter than the bird so this is a thought that came to my mind
you have executed this image fantastic
Arthur Morris
11-28-2013, 03:46 PM
Way wicked pose. I'd lose the o-o-f stalk above and behind the bird. The others are optional. Bird is somewhat lacking feather detail. Try some NIK Color EFEX Pro Detail Extractor...
Enrique Patino
11-28-2013, 05:37 PM
Thanks vishaljafhav and thanks Artie. I don't have NIK Color EFEX Pro, so I had to do it with PS... here is my re-post... is it an improvement in comp and feather detail? Thanks for your input!!!
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Jim Crosswell
11-28-2013, 07:47 PM
I like the pose, complimentary BG, setting and composition. Well done Enrique!
dankearl
11-28-2013, 08:12 PM
Pose is killer. Repost looks good.
Bonnie Block
11-28-2013, 09:54 PM
Hi Enrique. Repost is great! Love the pose.
vishaljadhav
11-29-2013, 05:13 AM
The repost surely takes it up a few notches , the eye is directly taken to the bird
Very nicely done
Holger Leyrer
11-29-2013, 03:23 PM
It is a wonderful image. The pose, perch BG, ... great.
Enrique Patino
12-02-2013, 09:58 AM
thanks for your comments!
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