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Cheryl Arena Molennor
11-08-2013, 09:36 PM
I like this image because of the angle and the way the colors of this grackle are visible. I clipped the tail so I had to crop. This crop has grown on me and I wonder what you all think? I was shooting a group of birds at close range hence the settings but ehy worked so....
Canon 1D MIV
500 mm f4
iSO 1250
f13 @1/400
cropped 30%off

Loi Nguyen
11-08-2013, 10:11 PM
Hi Cheryl, the details and colors are beautiful. I love the head turn, the eye, and the wave, but clipping the tail is quite unfortunate. Sorry, but the crop isn't quite working for me. Loi

dankearl
11-09-2013, 12:27 AM
i don't mind the crop, an interesting view and nice exposure.
I might darken the pupil a bit.

keith mitchell
11-09-2013, 03:47 AM
Cheryl I kike the pose and the colours and sheen of the bird if I have a tiny nit I am not sure about the eye looks a little dull.

Keith.:S3:

Cheryl Arena Molennor
11-09-2013, 09:00 AM
Thanks everyone. This is the first crop I came up with.

Rachel Hollander
11-09-2013, 10:10 AM
Hi Cheryl - the unusual pose drew me in from the thumbnail. I prefer the first comp to the second. The gradients of colors is really nice. Sharpness and detail look great too. There's a halo along the top though.

TFS,
Rachel

Cheryl Arena Molennor
11-09-2013, 11:20 AM
Hi Cheryl - the unusual pose drew me in from the thumbnail. I prefer the first comp to the second. The gradients of colors is really nice. Sharpness and detail look great too. There's a halo along the top though.

TFS,
Rachel
Thanks Rachel. That's crazy about the halo . I could hardly sharpen this without it looking over sharpened because it was soo sharp to begin with

Rachel Hollander
11-09-2013, 11:27 AM
Cheryl - I don't think it is a sharpening halo because it seems a little wider. My guess would be that it came from a tonal or s/h adjustment.

Rachel

Marina Scarr
11-09-2013, 12:16 PM
Love the quirky pose, the details and the colors on this one. I tried and like going tighter all around.

Steve Kaluski
11-09-2013, 01:02 PM
Hi Cheryl, just a thought, but I might just drop the Exp a wee bit, likewise the highlights. Just watch that eye doesn't look too light :w3