Himalayan Bulbul

[vishaljadhav]

Clicked this some months back on a rainy day sitting in the campsite

5D MIII + 400 f2.8 + 2x tc
ISO 1250 , f7.1, 1/320


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Critique and suggestions are welcome
vishal

[Shawn Zierman]

I like the sense of curiousity that I get from the subject pose...leaning in, perfect head angle. Pretty bird on a neat perch. Compositionally, this feels slightly unbalanced to me. I played around with an 8x10 crop with space off the right and top, virtually centering the subject...I thought that looked and "felt" even nicer to my mind's eye.

[Lyle Gruby]

Good looking subject and your perch adds interest which could give a unique composition. I'd like to see a comp with less on top and more room on bottom. Also, your bird seems a little oversharpened to me.

[Bill Dix]

Nice looking bird. And perch. I actually like the comp, except that I wish the left hand branch weren't quite so crowded. Lyle's suggestion might be worth exploring, though.