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Valerio Tarone
09-01-2013, 07:24 AM
Shot into a greenhouse-botanic garden.
Zoom sigma 17-25 f2,8 1/125 ev.metering ISO200 tripod some,minimal work in pp.
I try to render the circular form with a grandolar.
comments wellcome.

Jonathan Ashton
09-02-2013, 04:00 AM
Yes this works for me! I like the colours and textures, I would possibly consider going in just a little bit to eliminate the outermost two rows - what do you think. I reckon this would accentuate the circular pattern

Valerio Tarone
09-02-2013, 11:35 AM
Thank you Jonathan, there's a diversity in light shadows R/L, I wonder whether it doesn't work or not. A shot of flash could have been better, or not?

Jonathan Ashton
09-02-2013, 12:58 PM
For me it is fine as it is I would not use flash - as you say there is diversity:S3:

Valerio Tarone
09-02-2013, 03:18 PM
Thank you.

Steve Maxson
09-04-2013, 09:54 AM
Hi Valerio. I agree with Jon about not using flash - I think the soft shadows add interest to the image. I also agree that you might consider cropping a bit from each side. You have good sharpness within your DOF and I like that the center of the plant is tilted slightly to the left. This is nicely done!

Valerio Tarone
09-04-2013, 01:10 PM
Hi Steve, thank you. Yes I agree to crop a bit on the sides.

Cheryl Slechta
09-04-2013, 06:38 PM
Valerio, great shot! I love the perspective and the repeating patterns. Nicely done:S3:

christopher galeski
09-05-2013, 03:05 AM
nice image,agree on cropping each side.

Valerio Tarone
09-06-2013, 02:48 PM
Thank you Cheryl and Chris.