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Vivaldo Damilano
07-10-2013, 11:25 AM
D800e 14-24 f2.8 1/30s at f11 ISO100, two blended exposures.

Morkel Erasmus
07-11-2013, 12:53 PM
This looks good Vivaldo. Nice light and good blending. I would consider a slight CW rotation as I know it's hard to get a "level" with this kind of comp but the LHS seems to be sloped on the horizon?

John Chardine
07-11-2013, 04:05 PM
Yes Vivaldo, this is a very pleasing image to look at. You made the 14-24 "sing". I agree you could rotate a little to make the "flats" on the left look level. Who knows if they actually are level?! My eye is drawn to the rock which exits stage bottom-right. I would have tried to get the whole rock to eliminate it all together in the in-camera crop.

Andrew McLachlan
07-11-2013, 09:20 PM
Hi Vivaldo,

Lovely scene and well composed...agree on the rotation. Nice work with the blending as well!

Vivaldo Damilano
07-12-2013, 03:16 AM
Thanks of comments and suggestions. Will have to relook at rotation but agree with comments it does look slightly out :S3:

Rachel Hollander
07-12-2013, 08:30 AM
Hi Vivaldo - nicely done and the plant really adds to this. Rotation issue already covered.

TFS,
Rachel

Anette Mossbacher
07-12-2013, 11:08 AM
Hi Vivaldo, this is very nicely done. I might would add a tad more contrast or sharpening to the clouds. That is just me!
Have a great day

Ciao
Anette

Mark Dumbleton
08-14-2013, 11:28 AM
Nice one Vivaldo. If it were mine, I would add more punch to the sky, seems ever so slightly flat. What a spectacular landscape the Richtersveld is!