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William Currie
01-05-2008, 08:59 PM
Mark II N 500 f4

Maxis Gamez
01-05-2008, 09:07 PM
Hello Williams and welcome to BPN.

You have a lovely light here... the BG could be cleaner as is very distracting. I would love to see more room in front of the bird. You did well with the exposure, keeping nice details in your main subject.

Thank you for sharing and keep posting!

Ákos Lumnitzer
01-05-2008, 09:10 PM
This has super color and BG. I would perhaps crop a little below the ‘dead’ leaf on the top just hanging there, and also just above the little clutter in the bottom left corner. Though that way I think it will be maybe a a tad too squarish and I personally am not a big square person. However, more room in front of your bird would be nice and that could avoid the square-ish appearance. But at the end, the square really is not an issue I don't think.

Jim Poor
01-05-2008, 09:19 PM
Very pretty picture of this bird. The BG doesn't really bother me as I think the subject is strong enough to stand out on it's own.

You could, if you wanted, clone out some of the BG elements that others might find distracting.

William Currie
01-05-2008, 09:22 PM
Hi thanks it is my first time posting so i was just happy to get up on the site i could have cropped it better i"ll do better next time

Arthur Morris
01-05-2008, 09:57 PM
I like it but would like it better with a little less saturation and with the leaf at the top cloned out. Good job waiting for the necessary head turn.

later and love, artei

Glenn Bartley
01-05-2008, 11:23 PM
A very nice pose and great bird. I love these guys! But I agree that it is oversaturated.

Tom Cudzilo
01-06-2008, 12:08 AM
Excellent exposure, pose, details... but the top of the branch is too busy imho... but sometimes there is nothing you can do about this unless you do a setup.

Alfred Forns
01-06-2008, 09:08 AM
I like it a lot William !!!! One excellent looking bird !!! Just the one leaf removal for me !!! Congrats !!!!!!

DanWalters
01-06-2008, 09:10 AM
Nice shot. Really like the colors. Nice details in the black head as well.

David Hemmings
01-06-2008, 09:59 AM
Fantastic:eek:

Del Cockroft
01-06-2008, 10:31 AM
I really like this image. Such beautiful colours.

Matthew Studebaker
01-06-2008, 04:55 PM
I agree, the colors are supurb here.