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Kerry Perkins
02-16-2013, 05:14 PM
Hi all, it's been a while since I posted here and I had this image in my collection waiting for these words. :c3:

Cheryl Slechta
02-19-2013, 08:45 AM
Hi, Kerry, I love the image and the haiku:S3: Glad you're posting here again - I've missed your contributions.

Nancy Bell
03-29-2013, 09:13 AM
Kerry, I love the haiku! And the image is perfect. To match the word, "brilliant", I would be tempted to try a bit more saturation on the hummer and see how it looks.

Dawn Miller
08-12-2013, 09:46 PM
I love the haiku, although technically 'brilliant' is a three syllable word. The way you have rendered the bird as if it were a painting is just right for a haiku poem, too. The abstraction matches the sparse wording. Nicely done.

Kerry Perkins
08-29-2013, 10:28 AM
Dawn, not according to any dictionary I can find! :c3: Thank you all for your comments.