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Gavin Ferguson
01-25-2013, 04:42 PM
Dunlin shot from September '11.

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6184/6129641364_db5a1402fc_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/mcgonagle/6129641364/)

Sony A390, handheld, 300mm, 1/640, f5.6, ISO 100, Aperture Priority.

Randy Stout
01-25-2013, 07:26 PM
Gavin:

I like the pose of the bird, nice reflection. The whites on the bird look quite gray, so I think the image could go a bit brighter. 230 is a nice number for whites.

The head is a little soft (not sharp). The tail looks a bit sharper, so perhaps your focus point was off a bit.

I know it sounds funny to say the sand is too grainy, but there seems to be some digital noise in the image, a little surprising at this ISO. Did you need to bring the exposure up in post processing?

Cheers

Randy

Marina Scarr
01-25-2013, 07:45 PM
You have a lovely-looking bird here, Gavin, with a nice head angle and catch light. Good assessment by Randy. I would also note that your horizon is off by a little. The way you can tell in this image is that your beak should be in exact alignment with its reflection. If this were mine, I would crop it from the bottom. I have attached a version with a straightened horizon, with some crop and I sharpened the head a little bit. I think this comp, by minimizing the power of your rocks, works better to show off your bird.

Richard Stern
01-25-2013, 09:29 PM
Hi,

The bird is nice and sharp, but the angle is a bit high. Could you have got a bit lower? Also, there seems to be a bluish-green cast to the whole picture, especially the sand. I prefer Marina's crop.

Richard