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Pat Nighswander
04-25-2008, 09:54 PM
ISO 800, f 7.1, 1\60, 90mm

Robert O'Toole
04-26-2008, 10:44 AM
Color and sharpness is good. The BG white spots make it a little too busy, and the bloom in the upper right is distracting.
Really like the yellow and white details.

Robert

Fabs Forns
04-26-2008, 03:28 PM
It should go a little tighter in my opinion, a lot of distracting elements otherwise.
Lovely colors!

John Cooper
04-27-2008, 01:18 AM
The colour impact of this vivid blue iris catches the viewer's attention Pat. Agree with Robert about the portion of iris on the top right being distracting - cropping (or cloning) this out would improve composition.

Ed Vatza
04-27-2008, 08:05 PM
Have to agree with the other comments. The color and detail of the irises are outstanding but the background is too busy. Believe me I know. I am the king of busy backgrounds! ;)

Mike Moats
04-28-2008, 05:04 AM
Hey Pat, agreed on past posters comments on the BG being to busy and agrre on crop the flower on the right side.

Pat Nighswander
04-28-2008, 07:40 AM
Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate your help and comments.. only replying now as I have been off on a wildfllower birding adventure for the weekend.. I cropped the right and cloned out a bit of the bg.