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Bonnie Block
04-24-2008, 09:30 PM
Well, chalk up another dismal and cloudy day here in Seattle. Luckily, the harlquins invited me out to their rock for the first time. I waded out at low tide and on some precarious footing--but they stayed put and allowed me a very close view. Tough shooting in real low light--but fun just the same! :)
40D 300/2.8 IS + 2X TC
1/320s f/7.1 at 600.0mm iso640 Handheld (on slippery rocks! LOL!)
http://www.pbase.com/herderdog/image/96104711/original.jpg

Maxis Gamez
04-24-2008, 09:35 PM
Hello Bonnie,

I find the rocks a strong distraction. The horizon needs some works as well. There is a black line at the right lower corner which I'm not sure what that is.

I think this is a nice habitat image, but suffers from some basic technicals.

Keep them coming!

Bonnie Block
04-24-2008, 09:44 PM
Hello Bonnie,

I find the rocks a strong distraction. The horizon needs some works as well. There is a black line at the right lower corner which I'm not sure what that is.

I think this is a nice habitat image, but suffers from some basic technicals.

Keep them coming!
Hi Maxis, thanks for your comments.
I must have missed on the right side there, as I had already rotated this image a bit and had to add some canvas to the right.
Any better?
http://www.pbase.com/herderdog/image/96111738/original.jpg

Maxis Gamez
04-24-2008, 09:49 PM
Hi Bonnie,

Good job fixing the black like. I still think the horizon needs to be fixed, use your grids in Photoshop. I'll try to post my version in few minutes.

Maxis Gamez
04-24-2008, 09:58 PM
http://********.org/bpn/original.jpg

This is my version with the horizon fixed. Sorry about your signature but I had no other choose. Hope you like it and see the difference.

Thanks!

Maxis Gamez
04-24-2008, 09:59 PM
I actually think I over did it by two degrees. Getting late LOL... :)

Hope you don't mind!

Bonnie Block
04-24-2008, 10:04 PM
I actually think I over did it by two degrees. Getting late LOL... :)

Hope you don't mind!
Thanks Maxis! I do see. I should go more by the shadows than by the water lines. This image is a tough one for me.