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Valerio Tarone
10-07-2012, 02:11 PM
My attention is drawn by forms of nature! Nikon D300 nikkor micro60mm f14 1/4 spot manual focus WB shadow iso400 in PP certainly strong recovery of sharpness in USM , some work on levels, curves.
Comments appreciated.

Bob Miller
10-07-2012, 09:34 PM
valerio...I see where you are going with this but the negative spaces esp the brighter one TRC seems to be breking up the forms you are seeing. I would reshoot this but lets see what others think

Jonathan Ashton
10-10-2012, 04:55 PM
I am drawn in by the big leaf at the bottom and I like the juxtaposition of the other leaves with the exception of the one top right corner - it seems out of alignment becasue it is more or less vertical. I would also suggest you desaturate the greens - the back leaves look particularly saturated.

Steve Maxson
10-11-2012, 09:55 AM
Hi Valerio. I like the curving lines that lead our eyes to the center of the plant. I might suggest cropping a little off the top. Also, there are some sensor dust spots scattered around the image that would be easy to remove. :S3:

Valerio Tarone
10-14-2012, 08:10 AM
Yes, thank you all.