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Grace Scalzo
09-08-2012, 05:26 PM
Yes, I clipped the top wing in the original capture. I liked the frame enough to try and come up with a composition and this is the preliminary result. I'm thinking a bit more off the top to get the wing out of the corner. Thanks for any suggestions that you may have, positive or not.

Canon 5Dmk3, 500 f4 + 1.4tc
1/2500, f10, iso 800

Karl Egressy
09-08-2012, 06:25 PM
Great catch, excellent floght shot, Grace. Nice eye contact with both, bird and fish.
I think it would look better if you yook a bit off the top as you indicated.

laurie golden
09-08-2012, 07:31 PM
Grace,

Really a very good flight shot with fish. I would cut some off of the back (as much as possible) and the top but I think you need to add a little canvas on the bottom to balance this shot. You should be able to get the back of the wing to the corner. Definitely a keeper.

Marina Scarr
09-08-2012, 09:02 PM
Nice sharp capture with a pleasing BG and the fish is a big plus. I don't think this crop looks intentional enough. I would go for more off of the top and right.

Satish Ranadive
09-08-2012, 09:03 PM
Excellent flight shot.Love the details in whites and fish in the beak. Agree with you about crop of wing.

Regards,
Satish.

Arthur Morris
09-08-2012, 09:04 PM
Maybe just a bit more as Marina suggests. But you did a good job of saving it after getting too greedy :). I'd have done the same thing. Wonderful detail in the BLACKs and WHITEs.

gary ellwein
09-08-2012, 11:25 PM
Agree with aggressive crop. Excellent exposure and detail in blacks and whites. Eye contact with fish and skimmer is a bonus.

Gary Esman
09-09-2012, 07:02 AM
Sweet shot. Like both head angles and the incoming in your face type feel here. :S3: Great detail.

Gary.

Bill Dix
09-09-2012, 11:13 AM
Certainly a keeper with that great fish and flight angle. Ditto the crop suggestions above.

Juan Carlos Vindas
09-09-2012, 08:47 PM
A very cool species, as mentioned above, very nice details on both black and whites. I wish for a more close portrait or to see the whole bird, a magestic lovely bird in any case and would be happy if this pic. was mine!

Daniel Cadieux
09-10-2012, 09:57 AM
Ah, don't you love it when the fish is pointing the right way!! Cropping in a clipped wing is often a nice alternative. This image was worth it, and I agree a little more off the top and right will improve it even more. Love the strip of green at bottom.