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Raymond Packard
04-21-2008, 09:03 PM
Took this photo at Ding Darling D-70s Sigma 500 4.5 1/500 F-8
in keeping with the HAP discussion, would this be considered a proper head angle?
Comments welcome, eager to learn:)

James Salywoda
04-21-2008, 09:35 PM
I like the pose and pretty bg I just wish you had some Fill Flash on the subject.

Steve Canuel
04-21-2008, 09:44 PM
Hi Ray,
To my untrained eye this image appears to lack a little "pop". I think with the soft, similar shades of color it's important to have that extra sharpness/detail/contrast to prevent evrything from "blending" together. I'm sure one of are more experienced moderators could better explain. I do like the pastel colors of this one though. They go quite well together.
Steve

Dieter Schaefer
04-22-2008, 08:53 AM
Like the eye contact, wish for a slightly lower angle though. Image looks a tad dark and has low contrast - fill flash would have helped to lighten the shadows. Imported this PS, tried to eliminate a greenish cast, enhanced contrast and lightened the image:

Arthur Morris
04-22-2008, 04:31 PM
For me the head angle is fine if not ideal. Though the image looks a bit soft and flat, Dieter's re-post, for me is a bit over-done (but thakns Dieter for the effort).

Paul Pagano
04-22-2008, 05:21 PM
Raymond hope you don't mind my playing. A nice pose and I like the bg color a lot. I ran the image through Neat Image and then sharpened it and added some flash to lighten it some. It's always a treat to get these beauties looking at you. Nice.

Arthur Morris
04-22-2008, 05:41 PM
Way to go Paul! Great re-post.

Raymond Packard
04-22-2008, 09:21 PM
Thanks Artie,
I just found out that we share the same birth day, Flag Day only you have 10 years on me.
Ray
P.S. I'll have to remember to wish you a Happy Birthday on our special day

Raymond Packard
04-22-2008, 09:22 PM
Thanks Paul, I like what you have done with my photo

Raymond Packard
04-22-2008, 09:24 PM
Thank you Dieter, for your comments

Raymond Packard
04-22-2008, 09:28 PM
Thank for looking & sharing your thoughts Steve