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dankearl
07-09-2012, 09:18 AM
Osprey at first light (6:30 am), yesterday.

1/1000, f7.1, iso800, 600mm, HH, D800


DSC_1708bp2.jpg (http://www.birdphotographers.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=115329&stc=1&d=1341843274)

Stu Bowie
07-09-2012, 09:58 AM
Hi Dan, great show of the wingspan, sharp, with good DOF. Nicely separated from the BG, and cant help thinking that a traditional landscape comp will work better. :w3

Sidharth Kodikal
07-09-2012, 10:00 AM
Excellent wingspan, exposure and sharpness, Dan. Love the early morning light and the eye contact here.

Joe Senzatimore
07-09-2012, 11:22 AM
Great light on the bird , and the banking pose works well. Might tone down the BG a bit as I find it a tad too bright.

Wynand van Wyk
07-09-2012, 12:11 PM
Agree on the traditional comp! Great background and detail. A beautiful raptor this is!

Nekko Hund
07-09-2012, 12:32 PM
In addition to the previous comments, it’s noteworthy that you preserved the details in the highlights and the shadows.

Tom Redd
07-09-2012, 02:57 PM
Dan, I like the pose and the exposure of the bird. Overall a very nice image.

Rachel Hollander
07-09-2012, 06:25 PM
Dan - nicely captured with good detail and flight position. I agree with Stuart and would have loved to see this as a horizontal with more room to fly into.

TFS,
Rachel

dankearl
07-09-2012, 11:12 PM
Thanks for the comments and suggestions.
I am reposting for a PP exercise, I took the suggestions (landscape crop, lighten BG) and also processed as a Tiff File
after reading Doug Browns advice in another thread and sharpening only after resizing.
I can see a halo where the de-saturatation did not quite blend in, but that is an easy fix.
I like the sharpening after downsizing and the tiff file PP.
The converted TIFF file on an FX D800 Raw file is 207mb!
I liked the brighter BG better.

DSC_1708bp3.jpg (http://www.birdphotographers.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=115377&stc=1&d=1341893450)

Robert Holguin
07-10-2012, 12:31 AM
Wonderful shot. Love the massive wing span, excellent background, exposed very well, and I like the repost much better.
Well done.

christopher galeski
07-10-2012, 02:10 AM
very nice,great detail,nice flight pose,like the head turn,repost is the one.thanks.